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Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed




Waiting,
hoping,
praying.

Sitting,
laying,
staying.

Freedom,
smiles,
flying.

Bonded,
shackled,
crying.

Outside,
happy,
lying.

Inside,
lonely,
dying.
©2005-2010 ~hope-is-my-savior
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Author's Comments

another poem about me and how i'm feeling. if you don't understand parts of it, that sucks. it makes perfect sense to me :)

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~SelflessDefect Jun 2, 2005, 8:38:55 AM
:nod: I understand it perfectly :clap: awesome job

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I've got a single silver bullet
Shot right through my heart
To prove I can survive
Without you
-Hawthorne Heights
~BleedingMusic
~Despair-Faction
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~JFMuni Jun 2, 2005, 10:27:29 AM
yeah i agree with SelflessDefect... its understandable :D ... i like it :)

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cookies in a bunch go meow meow meow meow meow meow meow...
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~hope-is-my-savior Jun 2, 2005, 2:54:18 PM
:) thank-you very much!

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=martisunshine Jun 2, 2005, 2:56:20 PM
:salute:

:highfive: This is awesome!

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Comment to comment, not to get them back
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~Bottled-Evil Jun 2, 2005, 4:41:14 PM
babe your an amzing poet but i wish u dident feel this way.. let me know if i can do anything to help u out.. o and wheres my comment on my poem
LOVE YA LOTS

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someone plunged a dagger deep into God's chest
when he groaned it laid our entire civilation to rest
and when he pulled out the dagger and marvelled at the pain he could create
we stuck another in his back to seal the creation's fate
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~Dawn-of-a-new-age Jun 2, 2005, 8:23:07 PM
its great! simple but the message is there... I loved it!

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I'm just going to sit here and look pretty.. *sits*

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~hope-is-my-savior Jun 3, 2005, 6:46:17 AM
thank-you. :hug: i appreciate that. especially from the goddess of rhyming. :D

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~hope-is-my-savior Jun 3, 2005, 6:49:11 AM
:hug: thank you so much. i really appreciate that.

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